study of Church Parishioners who have experienced “Church Hurt”

Topic: A study of Church Parishioners who have experienced “Church Hurt”
I am doing a PhD in Conflict Analysis and Resolution. I am doing the the Research Proposal which consist of the first 3 chapters. I have some of it done already, however, there needs to be some changes. Will like to explain in more details exactly what I am requesting. I will upload additional documents with more detailed instructions especially regarding the methodology section as I would like Moustakas phenomenological outline to be used as the major writer although mention of other writers in the field can be done.