I need my essay editing as per my tutor and peer feedback on my essay. will apload file for feedbacks.
1. You need a clear thesis to guide the development of the essay
2. What you have is a statement of intent… revisit the samples/resources at the course site and make the necessary corrections.
3. No need to bold the heading of the list of references. The list must reflect APA standards, which are not consistent in this presentation
4. All listed source must be cited in the body of the text and vice versa