How do governmental agencies manage regulatory risks within the Health System?

Topic: How do governmental agencies manage regulatory risks within the Health System?
15000-20000 words excluding appendix
Draft feedback:
Thanks for starting writing this. However, the introduction that was sent to me does not follow what was intended with this project.
HSE was not the subject of the study, had done my research interviews to two regulators, the Medicines and Healthcare Products Regulatory Agency (MHRA) which regulates the use of medicines in the UK and the Human Tissue Authority (HTA) which regulates human tissue.
I am also required to compare at least two regulators. What is your objective in this dissertation???
Can you get back to me as soon as possible, as we need to think about what it’s gonna be done going forward. As it stands at the moment it needs more references and a good definition of what the dissertation is going to achieve. The reason I sent you my proposal was because it explained exactly what needed to be done in this dissertation.