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Instructions: Using quotes from your journal entries and the story, share your subjective experience of reading the story including your emotions, evaluations, memories, classroom discussions, etc, and how you came to a general understanding of what you think the story is about and what the central idea might be.

that was the additional instructions, now I’m going to attach an example of that type of paper and your goal is to do it like that. of course on that example paper they will talk about different story but the concept should be same. And i am also going to attach my essay with notes on it from professor, so pay attention to that also. Story ” Harrison Bergeron by Kurt Vonnegut”. oh yea, and also underline on your editing what you have changed.

conclusion: look at example look at essay read the story pay attention to professors notes and start working, done.