Incidence of Stroke among Patients Undergoing Either Peritoneal or Hemodialysis

 

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Presented ROL demonstrating the gap
Methodology discussed w/justification
Discussed recruitment of subjects & protection thereof including inclusion/exclusion criteria
Discussed how information will be analyzed
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