Prepare a research proposal for a rant application. However, due to time constraints I am unable to structure the literature material in a coherent manner that sells my proposal. I have got feedback from reviewers and I need to incorporate them at the same time ensuring the following:
STYLISTIC FEEDBACK and EDITING
• Optimum organization: overall focus and attention to thesis, unity, coherence, logical conclusions, avoiding redundancies, etc.
• Paragraph structure: controlling ideas, transitions, appropriate support, etc.
• Sentence structure: varied structures, proper subordination and coordination, parallel presentation of ideas, etc.
• Appropriate tone and diction
• Content evaluation: thesis, argument evaluation, development, effective support, and logical conclusions.
FORMATTING FEEDBACK AND CORRECTION
• Documentation: incorporating quotations, parenthetical citations, and works cited pages, bibliographies, footnotes and endnotes
• Evaluation of sources for timeliness, authenticity, and credibility
